This summer we will feature a writing sample from a student in each grade as we all enjoy a beautiful summer in West Michigan! Please join us each week to read these fantastic teacher-submitted examples of excellent writing!
My Own New’s
By Connor Merritt
[Please note: all writing is as Connor originally penned it. No edits have been made. Limited illustrations by the author.]
Today a cran escaped from the cran-box. The gards could not cech black cran. Who will cech black cran?
Chapter 3 Mr. Visser
When the cran landid he saw Mr. Visser! The Mr. Visser rescyud black cran. Blak cran got arrested.
Chapter 4 A Long Life
Black cran spent 7 months there. He was very bord. He had terrible night mares. What a long life!
Chapter 5 Fire Cran
After 2 days in jail, the wall was browk! Fire cran did it! Black cran got out of jail!
Chapter 7 Under Water
Black cran went for a swim. He went under water! He swam back to land! It was so much fun!
Chapter 8 Vidio Games
Black cran really wanted to play video games! But he could not play video games! He was sad!
Chapter 9 Back in Time
Black cram found a time machine! He went back in time! To be continued on Chapter 10. By!
Chapter 11 Lonely
After 3 days with out black cran all the crans were very lonely! Every one had nothing to do!
Chapter 12 The Bad Ending
After 73 years and 9 months and 22 day’s, nobody could do enything! It was a bad ending!
Connor is a rising 2nd grader at Bauerwood Elementary and his story was selected by his 1st grade teacher, Mr Josh Visser.